1/23/17 Midterm Revisions and Improvements

Throughout presenting our project to the class, Hannah and I received a lot of constructive criticism. First, Mr. Elsbree explained that I should possibly change the layout of the words on my cover page to make them more fitted around Nicks face. As well as this he explained to us that we may want to rethink using a colored background because printing this magazine would cost more for the colored background. Specifically in my case, Mr. Elsbree suggested that I try to get more of a variety of pictures since all of the pictures I feature are from one photo shoot with Nick. Throughout the next few weeks I will be working to make some of these changes to finalize my magazine. I am still waiting on feedback of the article I wrote to see if I need to edit it at all. Expect updates soon! - Hope Bumgarner